Sunday, May 13, 2007
my new rap song
in da club if they lookin sexy thats enough/its my permission to screw em/those girls over there wear their grama's panties/i wouldnt wanna do em/da industry let me in as a shoo-in/ now im all out/ got 1000 dollar shoes man/to my doubters i say screw em/to eminem i say keep doin wat u doin/ senior citizens call me a hoodlum/i guess they right/u wouldnt wanna screw with me/i'll cut u with a smashed bottle of hennessy/watch out not to spill any of it on me/cuz im dressed successfully/haters didnt get da best of me/always keep on testin me/lyrically my goals to be like weezy/drug lord pimpin wanna b like jeezy/make up, do slangin like off da heezy/make u cough up your blood u be wheezing/huffin and puffin/i make u sick cuz of my sick lines and rhymes/and i aint ever bluffin/u better recognize that this isnt a disguise
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2 comments:
seems kind of derivative.. i mean, are u a kingpin drug dealer? ..probably not. do u drink hennessy regularly? get some individuality man.
i'm not a hater, not even remotely.. i'm just sick of the same "best of me/ testin me" lyrics that have been floating around for years and get recycled every time someone new comes up.
sorry if i sound negative, just write about something even kinda different, get a new slant..
okay I kinda like it..you can do better to it though..just keep trying.
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